The Heavens by Gemma, Year 8


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2 Responses

  1. j.vantonder says:

    This is a powerful, evocative piece of writing, filled with foreboding. The characters of the young performer and her creepy Ringmaster are well depicted, and the ending is sadly inevitable. Circus performers are as trapped as circus animals. Excellent writing.

  2. k.bennet says:

    You build the rising action tightly with ominous undertones in your depiction of the Ringmaster. Well done!

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